A key to her heart from mine.

by Tyler
(Minnesota)

Well I have been going out with a girl for 2 months now. I am still unsure of where I stand with her but I am pretty sure I have her heart. When I finally get to hear how she feels for me I have a gift ready to present to her. I bought a diamond key/heart necklace pendant, but with it though I made a hand written note describing my feelings toward her and about our experience together (for future reference of the note, we were caught by police after hours in a park). It's just a simple letter that rhymes each line.

This is it: This key is yours it belongs to my heart. You’ve had it since I’ve met you, right from the start. Since we’ve met all I think about is you. Your laugh your smile, your stories too. To me you are beautiful in every way. You are perfect beyond words is all I can say. You make me feel myself so complete and at peace, even at midnight getting caught by the police. Everyday is an adventure I look forward to so much. Just as I look forward to your kisses and your gentle touch. I will tell you everyday sweet dreams and goodnight, just in case you’ve had a bad day I want to make it alright. I want you to laugh and giggle with me, roll up in a blanket and we can snuggle till 3. The best part of a night is when I get to look in your eyes; you would never believe I get so many butterflies. It’s as if the world freezes and all is at rest, we get closer and hug with your head on my chest. I bend down and kiss you with a smile on my face. I could stand there forever in our romantic embrace. I just want you to know you mean the world to me. You have my love if you have this key.

I did take out one line with her name but that is it. Give me some feedback tell me what you think. Will it win her over?